AN OPEN ARM - A Poem
81My Sweet Inspiration
Dear Readers,
Many of my poems had been inspired by fellow Hubbers here. And this one is not different.
In Uriel Hub Let Me Lean On You, she asked for company but doesn't need to hear anything at all. That is understandable and easy to be granted if I am really able to sit there at her side in person. But in this virtual relationship, words is our only brigde. So in this case, how we able to granted that kind of wish virtually? I wondered. Then I created this Hub.
The first part of this Hub had written at her comment capsule. It meet all the need and I thought it answered her wish perfectly. But I need more words to be able to created one Hub. There where I got jammed a little! :D And then this poem turned to be this way. Not really kind of poem I used to write and maybe far from the type of beautiful poem at all, but it more like what I usually will do and say in real life. Hehehe.. With little symbolism in here and there, I wish you can read beyond the words I used.
Uriel dear, I hope it can give you a little smile. And ah, I became confused about the type of pictures which fit with the poem. In the end I don't think anything will fitted at all, so I took drastic changed and put those kittens instead, because both of us, Me and Uriel really love cats.
Please enjoy.
Freya
I zip my mouth and open my arms
Will it give you enough of warm?
I won't ask you to be calm
Just sit there with you and write my pleadge to my own palm
Soon we will see the dawn
Soon...
Wrap that jacket tightly on your shoulder, dear
It's still too cold right now...
That song you wrote the other day
Can you put some music on it someday?
Right now I am in the mood of listening to the song
Kind of bored of Kitaro’s, since I made his works as my only company for long
Ah yes, go on and cry
I will look for something to wipe your tears away
But promise me you will wipe your nose by yourself, dear
I don’t want to touch that green and slimy smear
Mother told me to give away my Cat
She said it without weight on her mind like my Cat is only a hat
Doesn’t she know how impossible it is for me?
To simply give away my beloved baby?
Ah, sorry,
The zipper had broken somehow!
Now I’m worry
I have too many stories which about to flow
Here, take this handkerchief to clean that snot
Look closely on the mirror, dear, because you just missed one spot
Ah no, It just a beauty mark which I think kind of making you look hot
And shoosh! You absolutely need some eye drops!
Is it your giggle that I heard just now?
Hiding and pressing so it won’t flow
Or should I make other funny pages?
Which maybe will be done only after we are ages
Ah, there, the dawn finally has come
Isn’t that red sky a real delightsome?
Soon it will be wipes away
And we will start to burn if keep sitting at this bay
That will be great time to open that jacket
And dear, I should start to fold this blanket
Can we go home at that time?
Walking side by side, singing some ridiculous rhyme
But right now I will zip my mouth and open my arms
Will it give you enough of warm?
I won't ask you to be calm
Just sit here with you and write my pleadge to my own palm
Another Tributes For Uriel
Soon we will see the dawn
Soon...
Wrap that jacket tightly on your shoulder, dear
It's still too cold right now...
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Hey Ashantina Dear, Due the bad connection I wasn't able to edit this hub before and Too bad I missed one important part of the poem. But it is done now. Maybe if you come and read it again, you will see the connection which was not there before. Thank you, Ashantina. ^^
Freya, i was reading the peom and when i reached the pic with "Will just smile" i couldn't help but smile [not only any ordinary smile, but a smile from the heart for the first time. I really appreciate the poem and for the first time in a while it reminded me of all the blessings God has handed over to me. Right now, i feel like i really want to hug you for all the support. And although we never met in real life, somehow i feel the power of your words seeping into my soul. Sometimes it only takes so little to be there for someone and i guess you proved that to me.
It is as if i can feel your soul speaking to mine, and as if your words trascended time and space to speak into my heart. Simply, i don't know why but your words have this powerful effect on me. they simply breathe into my soul, and i am really grateful for that.
The pics are adorable, they simply make me want to smile more. The cat with the rabbit simply reminds me of tiny, but tiny has longer fur, and looks more tiny :D The last pic with the tiny cat reminds me of ketchup's children whom we called helicopter [DONT ASK:D:P] The grey cat with blue eyes in the three heads are better than one picture remind me of skinny as a kid [btw skinny eneded up NOT SO SKINNY after all :D]
The morning cat pic reminds me of ash as a kid, the Good morning kiss. Don't worry! I did brush my teeth and the cat with the rabbit remind me of kharmoush [which means to scratch in arabic] he was ketchup's firt litter ever. I almost cried out of happiness because the pics you posted resemble my cats a lot, cats which i which i don't have pics for and have missed a lot.
Freya as always i can't express how i feel for simply you leave me speechless.
THANK YOU SO MUCH [i really mean it from the bottom of my heart, and i hope i will always show you the support that you showed me!!]
Uriel
And why, Dear why? From several poetic poems, this ridiculous one is the one which make you able to smile? Is it because those comments on snot? LOL
Ketchup? Helicopter? LOL. You really have way in naming your pets, dear. And how many cats you ever have anyway?
I was in love with this cat from the Cat care shop. His name is Pelanduk. Pelanduk is the name of animal who always move so fast everywhere, and that cat, white and grey 4 months old Persian cat, really like Pelanduk. Just like my baby Torty too, but Pelanduk more friendly and have really sad and beautiful girly face. Too bad he is so expensive and I can't have another cat because my parents don't like animal. Oh, I wish I already have own house and live alone with my own family so I can have as much cats as I want! T.T
I'm glad this poem able to reach your heart, dear. As much as I want to be there with you but this is the only thing I can give you, my caring words.
Be well and strong, dear
Love you.
Freya
Beautiful Freya. I love the pictures. Little animals are so precious. Your tribute to your friend is wonderful. Thank's
well little helicopter was called by that name because as a kid he would push his head to drink milk from his mother and shake his ass and tail like a helicopter :D
Ketchup was named like that because she wouldn't eat except fries and ketchup :D Kharmoush (the one who scratches) was named after one anime character which i watched Dubbed in arabic :D and God tamashi simply because he was like my soul :D ~so he it is a weird way for naming cats but they did end up with some decent names :D Trotty :D can you post more pics of her :D:D and Pelanduk as well [just take a pic of that cute cat will you :D i simply warm up for cats :D btw i just touched the most snobby russian cat we have at uni (she is as fat as my leg filled with white fluffy hair :D adorable blue eyes which remind me of snow bell is stewart little :D
Best regards and sorry for killing your comment box :D
Beautiful Poem with the cutest photo's.
This is funny and beautiful Freya , all cats will be smiling this morning , except mine , he only wants food ....constantly! :-}
Hi, Freya, lovely poem, and a great tribute to your friend, I couldn't help but laugh at the lovely pictures! cheers nell
Hello everyone, I'm sorry for the late reply. I got busy life these days and kind of hard to free my time and hubbing.
Always Exploring: Yes, Ruby, animal is precious. They give happiness to their master and love their master no matter how they look like. real gift for our soul. ^^ Thank you, Ruby. Have a nice day, dear.
An absolutely wonderful poem. Your photo's are amazing, beautiful and adorable cuties.
Now I have to follow you, I get sucked in when I see cute animals like yours
Dear friends, sorry it took ages to be able to answer you. Free time for me is something precious right now because I deliberately giving away all my power and time to my new business. Wish this will going well and I reach my December target so I can have my freedom and my cat again. This is why I can't be here too much. I'm so sorry.
Salam, Uriel. I really miss you. Are you have free time right now? I hope all itches already scratched and those kittens fulfil your day with smile. I really miss Torty. T.T
Lady E, thank you. ^^
Ahorseback: if there is away to make cat smiling, I will be really happy. My Torty doesn't know how to smile at all. She just want to have some fun which sometimes it means biting me. ^^ Thank you, Dad. I'm really sorry for the late reply
Nell Ross: Hello, dear. How are you? I love making people laugh and smile because it make world so much brighter. ^^ Thank you, Nell.
Writer 20: I love to meet another animal lover. Thank you, Writer 20 and welcome to my Hub. ^^
I love your poetry so much Freya. God bless dear.
The pictures are so cute. They brightened my day. Best. www.picture-speak.com
Hello, King Micky, how are you there?
shonEjai, thank you. ^^ I'm glad you like it.
Ashantina Level 1 Commenter 11 months ago
These pics add a beautiful touch to your poem.