CAN YOU PLEASE, LISTEN TO ME? : A POEM
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I keep reading, reading and reading
The story you made for me the other day
And every time my tears keep coming
So move by the dream you put in my way
So wonderful the world you created
So peaceful the life you showed
So beautiful the image you gave me
Make me can’t help myself to dream it will be
Oh, you the one in my thought
Even so far this world has brought
The sadness you said you have there
Still not able to hold you from everything you care
You told me the other day
Want to hide from love that will only make you sway
But judge from how you made that story
Love is there even only will make you worry
Dear my brother, why don’t listen to your heart
What it is inside you, will be hard for you to hide
The pain might be everywhere but it is only a cart
I will put big bin on the corner, for you to drop it all aside
Live your dream, dear
No matter where you are
Don’t fall to heartbreaker
Rise again and show all what you are
If you say you broken, sorry I will never buy
Because I already seen the beauty that you are
Don’t only put all your heart in your work and let it become only story
Because maybe you will lost everything you should able to see
Can you please, listen to me?
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- LET ME IN
Im drowning under the rain Let me in, please let me in My body sought in the water My words become stutter Take one step and I will follow Just let me in, please let me in My... - BRING IT BACK TO MY MEMORY
I just found this poem again, under stock of my works. I wrote this when my love one decided to leave me and sent it to him under pressured of emotional pain and lost. And he answered me, "Your heart is... - HEART OF MINE
This heart of mine like the open window Welcome for many possibility which somehow Make me vulnerable to be in misery When everything hard to run smoothly But far the road that I already through... - I MEET A STORY TELLER LAST NIGHT
I meet a Story Teller last night He told me story before Im ready to said good night Oh, what a wonderful feeling I have When he shared with me his story and allowed me to saved For long... - WHAT I THINK WHEN I READ YOU
What I think when I read you Not really easy to describe I feel some short of dj vu But kind of hard to grasp I see the drawing While Im reading your mind So when you were sleeping I hold... - FLOODED IN MY MIND
Flooded Full with thought Should I admit? This challenge is too tough? Can I keep? Can I stay? If its only me to give Will you turn away? Flooded Afraid I should... - CLIMB TO THE MOUNTAIN OF LIFE
Climb, climb, I pushed myself to climb The mountain of life which I hope will become more kind High I already go, but still there is no one to meet Should I keep waiting, or it only myself the one I should... - FOR YOU, I ALWAYS BE THERE
I'm walking alone in this loneliness Thinking of you, thinking of you How far you left in that past My heart will always stay there, with you How long the loneliness will stay In... - CALL ME IN YOUR PRAYER
"Call my name in your prayer, dear"My friend once asked meFor her, life about to endWorries hanging in her headFor all sins she repentant, but never feel enoughFor all sad moments when she feel hurt But... - TAKE MY HAND
White little House at the BayLittle swing from rubber tyre painted white,decorate by flowerBig wood garden table, full of foodYou and me holding handsSmiling to each othersWill is this happen?In my dreams I... - WHEN I NEED TO CRY
I'm stand stillwonderingwhy my heart feel uncomfortable?Like ocean it's being ripple insideWave take away the sand andBring it back again over and overwhen the tide getting ebb, some is taken awayLongingIs... - LOVE HAS TOOK MY BEAUTY AWAY
today, out of the blue, I feel akward inside. Suddenly there is silent sadness flooded my mind. And when I took a picture of me and compared it with pic from couple months ago, I realized so many changed... - AT THE PARK'S BENCH
The leaves fallingOne, two, three.... So manyI sit alone in this benchAnd enjoying the breezeRain about to falling Caused the park emptyDark cloud hanging on the skyAnd Chill wind playing with my veilI... - LIFE IS SO FUNNY
Life is so funny In just split second Everything can turning upside down And It just need a second only When Family turn into enemy And best friend change into number one hate When what you... - FLOWER OF THE WINDY DESERT
Walking hereIn the green valley of lifeI'm lost in the crowdedPut my head on my knees and criedWhy life can not become easier, God?Why world doesn't really taste like it seem?And why what I think as...
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He is beyond all I ever imagined about how Story Teller should be and I still amaze in everything I keep found in him (Now, I'm sure I make his head getting bigger when he read this :D).
I don't know he feel lucky or not, maybe he will tell me later, because It is hard to talk with Polar Bear in winter, when he surely will choose to sleep inside his own cave than come out to speak to me. LOL
I'm good in words, but not really at English. But I hope I will be better soon. Thanks, Pintails, for the comment. You are so kind. :) And I already talked too much! Hehehe
I have to agree with pinatails7886. You do have a creative talent. You just might help this person (if he is real that is) as your compassion for him is admirable. Thanks so much for sharing this. Wonderful work.
He is as real as me and you in real life, Dohn. And I hope he will be. (I'm really blow your head now, right Mr. Story Teller?)
I can make character in my story, but not in poem, because poem is like a journal of my life for me. So, when you read it, you read my life. :)
Thank you, Dohn. I hope my creative talent really can help me become good writer, like you. :)
Very well written, Freya - you are so fluent in poetic thoughts...
Wow, that's really sweet words to say. Poetic thoughts? I love it! Thank you so much moulik Mistry. ^_^
I am sure he feels very lucky, also his head is big enough I bet, maybe it cant get any bigger. LOL. Of course he is real. Maybe one day you will tell us who he is. So that we can share in your joy. Salam my friend.
Hey- is that about me? If only. Thank you Freya.
Pintails, Maybe someday, but surely not today, or you might will steal him from me! LOL. Sallam.
Micky Dee, hahaha... you are so funny. Thank you for company me here. ^_^
i will steal tell me who it is please...... ^ ^
Lovely!! Poetically fluent, with substance and love. peace.
Poetlorraine, if you steal him it would not be fun anymore, so I will stay in silent. LOL. Thank you, Dear.
Peacenhim, Thank you. You are so kind. Peace for you too. ^_^
This is a very pretty piece, Freya.
Thank you, Carolina. I'm glad you like it. \^o^/
Nice poem, thank you for sharing:) I can learn a lot from you!
Ouch! I don't know what I do to be deserve to get such compliment, but thank you very much, Tim-Tim. I'm happy you like it. Have a nice day. ^_^
Thank you for zharing your beautiful poem.
ExoticHippieQueen : Thank you very much for reading this, dear. ^^
Thanks for the great poem. I love you each and every poem.
Mottiandbander: Hearing that from someone ( or 2?) whose write excellent piece of work himself really a great honour for me. Thank you.^^
You are quite a poet. I will read more of these.
xstatic: thank you. ^_^
pintails7886 Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago
Very interesting, and what a good poem. This story teller you keep telling us of, must be a lucky man. He sounds very talented and handsome, and just great. All men should be like him. LOL. Great poem, and I love your work so much. For someone so new to the english language you are very good at using it.