EVERY ONCE A WHILE IN MY HEART : A POEM
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Every once a while I feel angry
Questioning your mind, wondering your thought
I might sound like broken record to you
Sorry for that, I don’t mean it but helpless to held
Every once a while I feel jealous
Of every woman’s name your lips ever spoken
My talk was cheap and I became bitch
Sometimes it will be better if I just off the connection and drown my self
Every once a while I become greed
Wanting all of you, hate everything that hold me from it
From life and death if you ask which one I thought will be more suck
I said not being with you is the worst for me
Every once a while I able to keep
My grudge hide behind my mask, I tremble with tears
But sometimes it is the only thing I see
Clueless, I don’t know how to be me
Every once a while I disappeared
To the place where I don’t have to feel
Sometimes honesty came too deep
Cut in the middle and made me feel like I had been beat
But those my one, only happened every once a while
Because in so many times I don’t feel that way
There is so many times when I am so happy being with you
And those of course not just every once a while
That is why I still here with you
WHEN YOU ARE NOT AROUND....
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Ah, you always nice to me, Carolina. Thank you. ^_^
lovely sweet verses! :) love the pics and song too
Thank you, Blaise. ^_^ I am glad you like it.
...oh deeply in love!^.^...
guilty as charged! LOL.
Thank you for stopping by, Pinkhawk. :)
It's another beauty from a Beauty. Thank you for honesty. You are a treasure!
Madly, deeply and passionately in love. Love the video as well. Great job!
Sage
Micky, Such a sweet lines from you again, thank you!
Sage Williams, Thank you, very much. I'm so happy you like it.
Thank you all, for the comments. ^_^
Freya , it seems that a man could learn more from the love of a womans heart than he does. I feel your dedication and I don't even know you. Nicely done.
Oh , and I love the teddy bear picture, did you take it?
Ahorseback:
Dedication? Hmmm... maybe. But it is only something that I feel about the one that I love. The honest voice of my heart. :)
Ah, that bears picture is courtesy of google. Most of the pics I added on my hubs is from google. I love that pic too. So cute and sweet indeed.
Thank you, Ahorseback.
In spite of English not being your first language, your message comes through loud and clear.
Hello, rjsadowski, thank you very much. My English still really awful, but writing help me get used to it, and I hope in the end I will mastering it. ^^ Thank you.
That is why am still here ....
It hurts but every once in a while you make me forget
You shun the world and am all that fits
You read poems and smile at my every words
So, how ever hurt..
Every once in a while you give me the world
And that is worth a million smile..
Nice poem Freya.. It carries emotions
Freya, this is a lovely poem full of genuine emotion. I admire your courage to write it in a language not your own. That is something I would never try but you did quite well. Thank you for sharing this one.
Capedium: Nice feed back, Capedium. And I'm glad you like it. Thank you.
Poetic fool: Thank you. It is not easy to write in other language but the challenge intrique me. Still, I am far from good. Thank you for reading this
carolina muscle Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago
Nicely done, Freya!!!