GLOOMY DAY: A POEM
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Hhhhhhhh.....
Gloomy day
My heart so heavy
Not beautiful day
My knee feel shaky
The weight burdening my chest
My eyes start to acting funny
Making crinkle and raising the heat
taking control over me
Do not want to think
I need to reset my mind
Erase everything
That flooding and about to put root in mine
Istighfar
It’s all I need
And rest for while
From seducing by weep
I came to this path
In so much awareness
Should not allowing myself
Being bent by silly thought and foolishness
Just don’t think!
Definitely need to reset my mind
If it is hard to breath
Unless I know what I want
Keep that in mind!
Keep that in mind...
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But sometimes…
There is something about honesty…
Which is so hard to put away…
And just let it go…
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Hhhhh…
Gloomy day indeed!
I know I'm look gloomy. But even so, I still look cute, right?
MY OTHER POEMS
- YOU NOT READY TO LET HER GO
You not ready to let her go Missing her essence Dreaming of her presence Wondering when her absent You not ready to let her go Wishing for hope Craving for her love Fluttering when she become soft ... - BECAUSE I'M YOUR FAIRY
Think of me and maybe you will be lucky Dont tell other, but Im your fairy So ask me your wish and Ill try to make it be At least if this is only wish about me Think of me and maybe you... - BRING IT BACK TO MY MEMORY
I just found this poem again, under stock of my works. I wrote this when my love one decided to leave me and sent it to him under pressured of emotional pain and lost. And he answered me, "Your heart is... - LET ME IN
Im drowning under the rain Let me in, please let me in My body sought in the water My words become stutter Take one step and I will follow Just let me in, please let me in My... - CAN YOU PLEASE, LISTEN TO ME?
I keep reading, reading and reading The story you made for me the other day And every time my tears keep coming So move by the dream you put in my way So wonderful the world you created So... - HEART OF MINE
This heart of mine like the open window Welcome for many possibility which somehow Make me vulnerable to be in misery When everything hard to run smoothly But far the road that I already through... - I MEET A STORY TELLER LAST NIGHT
I meet a Story Teller last night He told me story before Im ready to said good night Oh, what a wonderful feeling I have When he shared with me his story and allowed me to saved For long... - WHAT I THINK WHEN I READ YOU
What I think when I read you Not really easy to describe I feel some short of dj vu But kind of hard to grasp I see the drawing While Im reading your mind So when you were sleeping I hold... - FLOODED IN MY MIND
Flooded Full with thought Should I admit? This challenge is too tough? Can I keep? Can I stay? If its only me to give Will you turn away? Flooded Afraid I should... - CLIMB TO THE MOUNTAIN OF LIFE
Climb, climb, I pushed myself to climb The mountain of life which I hope will become more kind High I already go, but still there is no one to meet Should I keep waiting, or it only myself the one I should... - CALL ME IN YOUR PRAYER
"Call my name in your prayer, dear"My friend once asked meFor her, life about to endWorries hanging in her headFor all sins she repentant, but never feel enoughFor all sad moments when she feel hurt But... - FLOWER OF THE WINDY DESERT
Walking hereIn the green valley of lifeI'm lost in the crowdedPut my head on my knees and criedWhy life can not become easier, God?Why world doesn't really taste like it seem?And why what I think as... - TAKE MY HAND
White little House at the BayLittle swing from rubber tyre painted white,decorate by flowerBig wood garden table, full of foodYou and me holding handsSmiling to each othersWill is this happen?In my dreams I... - WHEN I NEED TO CRY
I'm stand stillwonderingwhy my heart feel uncomfortable?Like ocean it's being ripple insideWave take away the sand andBring it back again over and overwhen the tide getting ebb, some is taken awayLongingIs... - LOVE HAS TOOK MY BEAUTY AWAY
today, out of the blue, I feel akward inside. Suddenly there is silent sadness flooded my mind. And when I took a picture of me and compared it with pic from couple months ago, I realized so many changed... - AT THE PARK'S BENCH
The leaves fallingOne, two, three.... So manyI sit alone in this benchAnd enjoying the breezeRain about to falling Caused the park emptyDark cloud hanging on the skyAnd Chill wind playing with my veilI... - LIFE IS SO FUNNY
Life is so funny In just split second Everything can turning upside down And It just need a second only When Family turn into enemy And best friend change into number one hate When what you... - FOR YOU, I ALWAYS BE THERE
I'm walking alone in this loneliness Thinking of you, thinking of you How far you left in that past My heart will always stay there, with you How long the loneliness will stay In...
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Yeah, spring already around! But I live in tropic Island, Dohn. Sun always around. My heart is good now. ^_^ And those kitten not mine, even I really want they are!
Thank you, Dohn. :)
You do look cute anyway. Always. Thanks Freya for beautiful words again. It's getting warmer. The earth has tilted for us!
ouch! Thank you. Enjoy your spring, Micky. Have a nice day.
Hiya, Freya, another lovely one. And I love the kittens, they are great. thanks. nell
Nell, I'm so happy to see you around. ^_^ Yeah, the kitten is cute, right. Thank you, Nell.
Well beautiful lady, I like this one, be happy!Tim W
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Timntim9: Hehehe. That is sweet. Thank you, Sir. You are so nice. :)
I like the picture , the poem, and the lovely Freya , my little muslim friend. Happy hugs tooo youuuu.Little kitten hugs by the way!
I enjoyed your poem, and as everyone else noted, the kitten pictures are adorable.
Hello Ahorseback. That is really sweet of you. Hug back! :)
D.william: Thank you. I am glad you like it. :)
This is such a pretty piece! God bless you Freya!
And God bless you too, King Micky. :)
My feline Sabrina would love to play with those big eyed beautiful kittens to. May the sun be shining in your heart and taking away the gloomy feeling.
Life is all about changes and the sun, moon and tides stir up the waves in our souls from time to time. We are all atoms affected by the slightest tilt of the Universe. I wish you well... very nice poem.
Saddlerider1: Thank you for the pray, Sir. I wish you and all friends here well too. I would love to me Sabrina. She must be very cute. :) Thank you for reading this, Sir. :)
i guess is gloomy day for you, sure atimes i wish if i could refresh my mind and let it rest, its a good poem, and i am sure voting it
Hi, chison emmanuel. It was gloomy day for me indeed but in the end everything great! Thank you, chison. I really appreciate your comment. ^_^
dohn121 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
Just this week, the sun finally came out from behind the clouds after about a week. It's no wonder I'm more cheerful. I sure do hope you feel better. It can't be all that bad with all of those kittens around ;)
Thanks, Freya.