I WISH I WERE THERE WITH YOU - A POEM
76TO REMEMBER THE ONE WE LOVE
I WISH
I wish I were there
At place where you are right now
To take pain away
I WANT
I want to sit there
Next to you so I can hold
Your shaky cold hand
GONE
Your love one is gone
Heart bleeding with tears. Frozen:
Pain seems eternal
UNSPOKEN
You’re Heart is broken
Filling you with memories
Sadness unspoken
HOW?
Here, I feel useless
Helpless, I keep wondering
How you cope with lost?
SILENT TEARS
I wish I were there
Cover you with my warmness
Wipe your silent tears
WANT TO BE WITH YOU
I want to be there
To that place where you were, Just
Want to be with you
MY OTHER HAIKU
- SEASON OF LOVE: HAIKU COLLECTION
Dear Readers, Hello. How are you today? Writing Haiku is new to me and surpraisingly more difficult than writing long usual poem. But under Sa`ge help, I managed to made several. (Thank you, Sa`ge! Love... - SLUGABED: HAIKU'S COLLECTION II
Hello, dear readers, how are you? Here I put again several Haiku I made. I don't know but somehow feels like not really sure about the result. Seem I still not yet mastering about all season and scenery... - MY BLOCKED MIND : HAIKU'S COLLECTION III
"Hei, you! Yes, you!" Stuck, wont move a bit So cruel locked me in it No more spring will left "I wonder what are you doing." Words move from my mind Through ear, tinkling on the floor ... - HAIKU COLLECTION IV: WORRY
Worry carving ache Holding heart in solemn thought When lost sight of you Damned this heart wont stop Anxious swing without you Stabbing deep on me Wondering, I pray Hoping god will...
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Nice Poetry
Freya my dear girl , you just wrote the perfect poem , for a moment I thought it was for me! , Thats how real it is. Excellent writing.ox
Just beautiful, very deep. I feel your pain and loss.
Very deep and beautiful.
Freya...I think this is your best work yet. The mix of words and imagery...all so beautiful and so well constructed...Bravo! Great Job! WB
Oh -how I feel the pain and love and loss.
I like how you structured the Haikus and included pictures to help accentuate the words.
Lovely and Brilliant:)
Beautiful! The pain of not being able to help is something so deeply felt, the imagery is so wonderful. I loved it!
Cracknutcase and profsear : Thank you very much! ^_^
ahorseback :You are so kind. Thank you. It feels so real because it is real, my dear one just lost his loved one and I can't be there to help him. So sad. :(
Becky Puetz and kathryn1000: Thank you very much. :)
Wayne Brown: Aww! That is really nice comment for my works. Thank you very much, Sir. :)
Minnetonka Twin: Haiku always give me toothache! LOL. It is hard to make so I am really happy when I get great response. Thank you very much, dear. :)
sofs: Thank you, Sofs. Your comments mean a lot for me. Thank you. ^_^
Very beautiful poem Freya, I wish I were too.
I felt like someone wanted to ease my pain and worries. This spoke to me today. God bless you dear Freya. Be safe. I hope Allah will bless your steps, always.
Agusfanani: Thank you, brother. ^_^
Micky Dee: I am glad if my words can give something good to your heart, dear. Insha Allah, Allah bless us all.
I wish i were there too,God bless you Freya!
Thank you, Sord. May Allah bless you to, brother. :)
Beautiful words Freya.
Take care and God Bless.
Lovely poem.
My dear friend, you are very talented. I liked how you choose many words become a beautiful poem like this though it looks pain. But keep on writing. I'll be the man who always support you. Cheers....
Prasetio
Absolutely lovely - and the pics really add to the beauty!
This is so beautiful, actually totally stunning. I loved the words and the awesome pictures. Great choice of song to accompany your hub too. Voting up and pressing your tabs.
Beautiful! I found the pictures suited the poem really well, keep writing! :)
What a nice haiku with beautiful pictures! Freya, your journey brought you to the right direction to be poetry so you can turn any direction you need. Please keep up to follow your dream and never stop. I voted up and useful. Well done sister and Thanks for sharing.
Beautifully done. Gorgeous pictures add to the magic of your words.
very nice. Keep it up.
Thank you for wrapping my heart in the warmth of love, for blessing my day and giving me joy. You are the dearest heart, and I am blessed.
Eiddwen: Thank you, Dear. May God bless you too. ^_^
shegarlynn: Hey, Sis! Thank you for reading this. :)
prasetio30: You are a great friend. Thank you for your support, Pras. I really appreciating it. ^_^
akirchner: Hello, Audrey. Thank you, dear. I am glad you like it.
acaetnna: Hello, dear. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I really like it. :)
gachapoz: Hi, gachapoz. Your avatar is my favorite Pet! So cute!!! Thank your for reading this. :)
Neverletitgo: Salam, Abdi. I hope it's true. I really do. Thank you for your support, brother. :)
Docmo: Ah, you are so nice! Thank you, docmo. \^o^/
katrinasui: Hello, Katrina. Thank you, dear.
DavePrice: Ah, my pleasure, Sir. I am so happy if my works can give great feeling to reader. Thank you. ^_^
....well your words are so genuine and so sincere - I am quite sure that you must be a visiting poetic angel here on our earth!!!!
Awww! Mr. E, you are so sweet! I am blushing now! hehehe... If I am an Angel all should do is to spread my wings and reach my man, but I can't. This duck not even able to jump. Only kwak and writing a poem. LOL. Thank you, Mr. E.
I read it through the eyes of my mother. My eyes are wet. Thank you.
Daouady: Aww! I'm so sorry. I hope you already feel happy again now. :)
I believe that epigramman has it right! You are an angel on earth!...
Hi, Dad. Aww! Thank you very much. ^_^ But I think each one of us have angel-like characteristic inside. It is God's blessing for us. But this world corrupting it little by little and sometimes make this characteristic hidden far from our appearance. For those who still feel grateful to see kindness in others, that is mean this characteristic still dominance in themselves. So I think, all of us are angels in this Earth. ^_^ Thank you, my virtual father.
Lovely poem from deep in your heart. Very beautiful God Bless You.
Stars: Thank you, Stars. God bless you too. ^^
Sensitive yet powerful haiku forms...each spoke to my heart...thank you for this gift which I unwrapped over my morning coffee...Insha Allah, my friend...Larry
Maven101: Larry, ah thank you for nice comment. I'm very happy able to give good read as addition for your morning coffe. Thank you. ^^
Beautifully expressed words. Awesome!
Hmm nice i like it.
love you Freya.
Ubanichijioke (that name is so hard to remember) thank you very much. \^o^/ yaiy!!!
Noorenaz dear, love you too! ~ (?? ³?)?~~~?
Cracknutcase Level 1 Commenter 16 months ago
Beautiful :) Voted up...