SMILE, MY LOVE ONE, SMILE! - A Poem
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Dear Love one,
World is indeed big
But you have to believe
Our heart is bigger than it
There is something in our heart
Which is a little part of God
It is the one whose always tried to reminding us
Told us to stop when we walk near wrong path
We should learn to be more listen
We should try to search behind it wisdom
Because once you know how to find it
There will be so many greatness available for your benefit
You will find tranquility
Enjoying peace inside your heart in humility
You will never care about what others had said
Because you already know what is wrong and what is right
You will know the truth about this life
Feel grateful because you stand in that path
You will start to realize what you never noticed before
Understand what you have to pursue furthermore
You will walk million step further than everybody
Leading those who left behind, following happily
But before you can reach it
There will be battle which you have to win
Need to be strong and always brave
To be able to standing still and to be save
You can share your heart
You can share your worries
Everytime you need me
I will always be here
So please, smile...
Your beauty is gift from God
Don't keep it in hiding under
That cloudy thought which will sucking out all of your energy
Then will only spare you a misery
Now smile
I will always become a loyal company
Hurry up and smile!
Give your heart a beautiful melody
Will you listen to me and smile?
If you still do not want to smile, I will come and beat you with stick until you will end up looking just like this:
Or this?
Unless not like this!
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Lovely poem.
A picture of a smile is worth a thousand memories to the dentist,it seems:-)
Lovely poem my friend Freya. keep poems coming!
I'm smiling.
Loved your humourous ending. Made me laugh! Thanks!
Hey there Freya - you cut that out !!! You made me smile so much that it was hard to see over the smile to read the whole poem.
Gus :-)))
Accaetnna: Indeed, dear. Mostly if looking like number 1 & 2 under the poem. Hehehe. Thank you, dear.
Qudsia : Thank you, dear. I'm glad you like it.
Mentalist Acer: I am glad you are not Dentist, Sir. I really afraid of dentist. Hehehe. Thank you, Sir. ^^
Katrina Sui: I try, dear. Your support mean so much to me. Thank you. ^_^
Shitinski : I am happy if you do. Come back to us soon, Charlie. We miss you a lot! Thank you for still around.
Peggy W: Ah! So mission accomplished then. Hehehe. Thank you. ^^
Gustheredneck: For someone who already make me smile a lot, the success mission of this hub on you feels really good to me! Hehehe. Thank you, for reading.
acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 13 months ago
Well you can't beat a great smile! Lovely poem Freya.