TAKE MY HAND : A POEM
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White little House at the Bay
Little swing from rubber tyre painted white,
decorate by flower
Big wood garden table,
full of food
You and me holding hands
Smiling to each others
Will is this happen?
In my dreams I ask
When family and friend gathers by love
With you and me as the central
In my heart,
I can sense the tears
I know it's about to come
In the day when I grasping your hands
And say goodbye to all
My life here full with dreams
But so far away and sad
When my life with you which about to start
I know will give me many probation before it right
But I still choose to be with you
Because it is better to live this life
And taste the pain together
Than spoiler in dreams only.
So please, don't hesitate
Just take my hands
And bring it away
with all of me
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You're welcome, and thanks. It is nothing than your 'the girl in the avatar' which I enjoyed so much. :)
Assalam alaikum sis', how have u been? Just drop-by to say hello and commend ur efforts, keep it off and may Allah reward u. Wassalam alaykum.
Waalaikum sallam, Uthman. I'm in usual mood. You know. :) Thank for your nice attention. You are such a great brother for me. Thanks.
Thanks again Freya Cesare. I loved the words and the pictures. the pics made me colder though. I'll look at this again in summer!
Your welcome. :)
THAT WAS REALLY ROMANTIC, TWO THUMBS UP, THANKS...
snow makes me feel cold but your words warm me up thanks
Thanks Karen And Poetlorraine. :) I put that pic because I don't have perfect fit with the one in my thought.
"White little House at the Bay
Little swing from rubber tyre painted white,
decorate by flower"
Hard to be find anywhere! :lol:
lovely,sista...
:D Thank you.
dohn121 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
Wow. I really enjoyed this. I also enjoyed the photos that accompanied it. Thanks so much for sharing!