THE BEST PART OF YOU : A POEM
79What I see in you,
The best part of you?
What makes me like you,
Still you want to know?
You are weird! Well, me too!
Make us even in so many ways
You read my craps, even when it really sucks.
And laughed to my jokes, no matter how it sounds.
You understand my riddle, even I never explained
When other rolled their eyes and think I’m crazy
You love to tease me in so many ways,
Gave me laughed, as your gifts in my days
You just like me, another me.
Make me wondering how far we will keep finding our similarities.
You giving me inspiration to fill my empty days.
Become the reason, for me to wake every day.
You know what compassionate heart means, and living through it
Wishing for the same dreams, which I’m really grateful to knowing
You asked me become your company, knowing I need that
Hold by loneliness, to finally found each other
Or maybe it is just because you are so cute with that beard
And making my tummy fluttered every time I look at you? :D
To be Honest, Dear,
The best part of you that I like so much
Because it is you, and not anybody else
But you
MY OTHER POEMS
- GLOOMY DAY
Hhhhhhhh..... Gloomy dayMy heart so heavyNot beautiful dayMy knee feel shaky The weight burdening my chest My eyes start to... - YOU NOT READY TO LET HER GO
You not ready to let her go Missing her essence Dreaming of her presence Wondering when her absent You not ready to let her go Wishing for hope Craving for her love Fluttering when she become soft ... - BECAUSE I'M YOUR FAIRY
Think of me and maybe you will be lucky Dont tell other, but Im your fairy So ask me your wish and Ill try to make it be At least if this is only wish about me Think of me and maybe you... - BRING IT BACK TO MY MEMORY
I just found this poem again, under stock of my works. I wrote this when my love one decided to leave me and sent it to him under pressured of emotional pain and lost. And he answered me, "Your heart is... - LET ME IN
Im drowning under the rain Let me in, please let me in My body sought in the water My words become stutter Take one step and I will follow Just let me in, please let me in My... - CAN YOU PLEASE, LISTEN TO ME?
I keep reading, reading and reading The story you made for me the other day And every time my tears keep coming So move by the dream you put in my way So wonderful the world you created So... - HEART OF MINE
This heart of mine like the open window Welcome for many possibility which somehow Make me vulnerable to be in misery When everything hard to run smoothly But far the road that I already through... - I MEET A STORY TELLER LAST NIGHT
I meet a Story Teller last night He told me story before Im ready to said good night Oh, what a wonderful feeling I have When he shared with me his story and allowed me to saved For long... - WHAT I THINK WHEN I READ YOU
What I think when I read you Not really easy to describe I feel some short of dj vu But kind of hard to grasp I see the drawing While Im reading your mind So when you were sleeping I hold... - FLOODED IN MY MIND
Flooded Full with thought Should I admit? This challenge is too tough? Can I keep? Can I stay? If its only me to give Will you turn away? Flooded Afraid I should... - FOR YOU, I ALWAYS BE THERE
I'm walking alone in this loneliness Thinking of you, thinking of you How far you left in that past My heart will always stay there, with you How long the loneliness will stay In... - CALL ME IN YOUR PRAYER
"Call my name in your prayer, dear"My friend once asked meFor her, life about to endWorries hanging in her headFor all sins she repentant, but never feel enoughFor all sad moments when she feel hurt But... - FLOWER OF THE WINDY DESERT
Walking hereIn the green valley of lifeI'm lost in the crowdedPut my head on my knees and criedWhy life can not become easier, God?Why world doesn't really taste like it seem?And why what I think as... - TAKE MY HAND
White little House at the BayLittle swing from rubber tyre painted white,decorate by flowerBig wood garden table, full of foodYou and me holding handsSmiling to each othersWill is this happen?In my dreams I... - WHEN I NEED TO CRY
I'm stand stillwonderingwhy my heart feel uncomfortable?Like ocean it's being ripple insideWave take away the sand andBring it back again over and overwhen the tide getting ebb, some is taken awayLongingIs... - LOVE HAS TOOK MY BEAUTY AWAY
today, out of the blue, I feel akward inside. Suddenly there is silent sadness flooded my mind. And when I took a picture of me and compared it with pic from couple months ago, I realized so many changed... - AT THE PARK'S BENCH
The leaves fallingOne, two, three.... So manyI sit alone in this benchAnd enjoying the breezeRain about to falling Caused the park emptyDark cloud hanging on the skyAnd Chill wind playing with my veilI... - LIFE IS SO FUNNY
Life is so funny In just split second Everything can turning upside down And It just need a second only When Family turn into enemy And best friend change into number one hate When what you... - CLIMB TO THE MOUNTAIN OF LIFE
Climb, climb, I pushed myself to climb The mountain of life which I hope will become more kind High I already go, but still there is no one to meet Should I keep waiting, or it only myself the one I should...
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This is a wonderful, upbeat vision on love and intimacy. I'm so glad I got a chance to read it. You have a flair with detail because it's obvious you write about what is real and that comes through. :)
I like the images, lovely, poem is sweet as well, Maita
Iounn, Thank you. I'm really glad you like it. I write about what I feel and it is real feeling. Thank you. ^_^
Maita. me too! I have those pictures for so long already, waiting to perfect time to display those, and I guess, this poem, even talking about relationship between man and woman, it also talking about relationship in general, so I think maybe they can fit together. I'm glad you like it.
Thank you, Maita, for you nice comment, and thank you to visiting me.
Hmmm... all breath have been taken away? You need ambulance? Hahahaha... I'm glad you like it, Polar Bear. ^_^
It touching my heart. I know this poem is represent your pure heart. I am glad to find it more.....
Ah, sallam, Prasetio. Nice to see you. ^_^ Thank you. That is so sweet of you.
This is lovely.. I dunno which I like better, the words or the choice of pics!!
How about both? \^o^/ hehehe... Thank you, Carolina.
Freya- this is so pretty, just like you. You know how to love. You have such a great heart! Peace
Ow! Thank you, Micky. That is so sweet of you. ^_^. Thank you.
I liked this poem!
Thank you.
This is so lovely and one of the best poems I read to-day - well done, very well done...
Thank you, Moulik. And that really best compliment for me. \^o^/ Thank you.
you can be my co pilot:)
Awesome.. love this..
Kenneth: Hahaha....
Evnpenmanship : Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad you like it.
Though it seems I came late to your party, I must tell you how much I liked this poem. Very sweet, like a tender touch or a warm hug.
The photos are just the perfect accompaniment.
CP
Hello, CP. Welcome to my Hub. The party here never stop, Sir. So come anytime! I will really happy to meet you.
Thank you, Sir. I am really happy you like this. These are my favorite collection of pictures. Beautiful Pictures.
Thank you for visiting me. :)
Very nice, touching
Thank you, timntim9. :) Welcome to my hub.
This is love..love.. love..lovelyyyyyy
I have nothing to say put a hearty smile
This poem took my breath away..
Showed me how beautiful love could be
With each word piercing through my heart
Word for word, going forth and back
Is like a perfect story that should never end.
Love like this is divine
The day I find, MY LIFE IS COMPLETE..
Freya, this one of my favorite..
Hope you wouldn't mind
Day by day, I will snick to steal a line or too
Lines I will whisper in my lovers ear..
I believe she will let me steal a kiss or two when am done.
LOL. I'm happy able sharing the precious words with you, Capedium. But the words will be empty, without the heart in it, so, say when you mean it and you will bring your lady to heaven. Thank you for your comment. It put smile in my face.
A quick stop.. Wanted to share this so I could make someones day..
Say hi for your someone from me. ^_^
Mr. Story Teller 2 years ago
This is very very sweet. WOW!!!!! Is all I can say, this poem was so beautiful, all my breath and words have been taken away.