TO BE WITH YOU : A POEM
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Hold my dream, I will hold yours
Keep the hope, don’t let it go
Your life could be short, but so is mine
Why let it go when we still have time?
My heart in you beating faster
I can hear it, I can hear you
If the reason hard to be muster
Don’t look for it, just let me be with you
Love is to share;
The world in your head
To feel the pain in your heart
And erase the sadness in your eyes
Not just about
Sharing the good and the sweet
Or to live inside your arms
And always have good time
Love is to hold everything you are;
To be with you…
To be with you…
Please, don’t ever let me go!
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WOW!!! Freya, a this is a beautiful poem, as always you have a knack for choosing great pics and vids or songs to go with your work. I think you should print your poems out and make a book for them. ;) I would love to help you accomplish this inshaa Allah. Talk to you soon inshaa Allah.
Mentalist Acer: This what love for me; the optimisticaly uplifting sentiment ^_^. Thank you to give it a name. You always have way with words. Thank for visited me, Mentalist Acer. :)
Good idea, Pintails, and maybe I will, with your help of course, like always ^_^. Thank you, dear. But the compliment to these poems should give to Mr. Story Teller, because he is my biggest inspiration. Without him will be impossible for me to write so many poems in these several months only.
....just to be embraced by your poetic thoughts is a privilege and honor!
The honor is mine, Sir. Thank you. \^0^/
You love so beautifully!
Thank you, Micky. :)
hi freya,
what a great poem =)
i enjoy reading it very much
This is so beautiful .. Stimulates all the love and romantic adrenalin in us!! Thanks for the wonderful piece of poetry!!
Hi, celinewayne ^_^. Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it.
Dreamreachout, how are you? Thank you. that's really flattering words. Thank you for reading this. ^^
Mentalist acer Level 6 Commenter 24 months ago
An optimisticaly uplifting sentiment Freya:)