YOU : A POEM
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Always in my mind; the thoughts about you
Meet my day with thousands of dreams; it is always about you
Love flying through the air to meet my soul; wrapped around my being
Despair and hope catapulted into the highest heaven; wish for your coming
It’s not been too long since our road has met
Fate made me walk around the life and kept waiting someone to be with
Then when you showed in the other side of my world; I was frozen on my feet
In my entire dream was never anyone as beautiful as you become someone who I will let to be my lead
Now, your presence is like a song from heaven for me
Your beauty runs through the whole part of my life
Leaving trace in every step I take; calling me, breath into me
Even sometimes its feels like being cut so deep by a knife
Preparing my heart to be together with you; is a beauty in this pain of long wait
Which I will keep later in the future; as wonderful gift from memories of you
Right now I will cherish every present of your being and anything I am able to relate
Knowing you are existed, knowing you are alive, knowing it is you
You….
Only you.
(Thank you my dear, Mr. Story Teller to become part of my world.)
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Hi, Freya, sorry I haven't been over, I hope you are well? lovely poem, so much meaning. cheers nell
A poem from the heart, leaves the reader with deep thoughts of love. So fragile yet so poignant, love is fleeting capture and harness it and never let it escape your soul. Lovely read, much enjoyed by me.
Akirchner, thank you for reading this. The pleasure is mine.:)
Nell, It's ok, Nell. Glad to have you back. Once again, happy birthday! Hope your toe and ear are good now! :)
Saddlerider1, ah, thank you for you thoughtful comment. I really like it. This is what I feel at this moment which indeed making me fragile and so open to get hurt, but I can't able to run from it. I believe in love there is no such thing as keep it or leave it, because if you don't want it and leave, love will stay still, and eat you from inside. So, why bother? Thank you, Sir. :)
I really have no words to describe or comment on this but as you pointing to anyone who is YOU then i would say- I love You too!
Hehehe... I appreciate that you still leave comment even you don't know what to say. :) Thank you. ^^
interesting, and touching thanks
Hi, Joy. Thanks. This poem was made in my mother language at first so maybe in my will to converted it, I messed this up :(. I hope this is not too awful to read. ;D
Another elegant and poniente piece from the heart...amazing poem Freya:)!!
I'm glad you found your love!
Thank you, Mentalist Acer. That really flattering comment. ^^ Thank you.
Micky, I have to thanks Hub Pages for that! :p
Thank you for sharing this. It makes me miss someone though :(.
Ouch! It is ok missing someone, Jacob. It's mean you are still alive and know what love is. :)
Thank you for reading this.
Hi, Freya, much better now! but I did just bash my arm against the microwave! it's got a lovely bruise! lol oh well at least my ear is better! cheers nell
Ah, Nell! So you got another birthday present from microwave? I really not envy you, dear! Trust me! LOL.
Have a nice day, dear.
You're in love, stay in it no matter what. :)
That's so touching, Freya
Yes, I am. ^^ I'm trying, Blaise. Always.
Thank you, dear. :)
..and only YOU could write something as lovely, deeply poetic and soul searching as these words which caress me.
The poem was very loving, and lovely. Thank you for sharing
Epigramman, You are so nice! That's really flaterring words and my head getting big now. Hehehe... Thank you, Sir.
Hi, Rasenstars1, I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for reading this. ^^
Beautiful
Entwinds, thank you. ^^
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL!
i love your poem...
thank you so much for creating such a poetic masterpiece of yours....
Hello, Lookatme2010. Thank you very much. That's really sweet of you and make me so happy. \^o^/
... Oh my, this poem touched me ever so. It's a brilliant piece of poetry, and it's something that really makes you think! I absolutely LOVED it!! Thank you ever so much for writing this and sharing it with everyone! I hope that you will publish more in the time to come!!
-Kennedy
P.S.- I would love it if you would check out some of my poems also!! c:
KennedyYakas, thank you for your thoughtful comments. If it is God's will, He will give me more inspiration to write, so I will keep writing. ^_^
I will visit you soon. Thanks.
Freya this is breath-taking Amazingly beautiful unique and truly stupendous. You always write great poetry which always leaves a unique effect on my soul and day :D
WOW~~~~~~!
Uriel, you are soooo sweeeeeet! I am glad you like it. I hope I really able to touch you with my style. both of us have really different style. I doubt I will able to write dark poetry like you did almost all the time. really amazing poetries you have there!
This is a beautiful account of what it feels like to fall in love. Well done, Freya.
Thank you, ACSutliff. I am so happy you like it. :)
That is wonderful.I have never met someone from Borneo Island though I did teach some students from Brunei once,many years ago
Hi, Kathryn1000. Well, Indonesian are similar with Brunei Darussalam people. We are all malay race. :)
That is the great things about internet because we can meet people from everywhere in the world. Thank you, Kathrin. :)
leaving trace in every step I take
Cuts like knife.. Beautiful..
The beauty of love sometimes is pain..
That moment why your hearts beats together as one
When you fear that you might faint
When missing him makes you cry....
You you are scared to death that you might love him.
When he takes your breath away...
I love the story it entails..
Love's journey is not in vain..
It's tough.. But love conquers all
Capedium, that's beautiful. thank you. ^^
akirchner Level 4 Commenter 23 months ago
Lovely! Thanks for writing such a beautiful poem and sharing it with us.