Winter Spring - A Poem
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For Eve With Love
I found this letter this morning inside my inbox.
“I really love your poem makes me inspired everytime I read them. Now I am very sad because my boy friend left me because of his jealous which I dont know understand why. Do you have any poem? I want to share it with him. Thank you so much im waiting your reply . Take care and Allah be with you always.
Eve”
Dear Eve,
Thank you for liking my poem. It is amazing feeling to know that my poems can do more than just giving happy feeling for me who wrote it, but inspiring others too. That’s put smile in my face. Thank you.
Actually I don’t have time to write a poem today, but I know love and pain feels like. I just lost the one so dear in heart recently. That’s something unbearable, mostly if we have to through it alone and that’s why I decided to put down my dictates and write you a song about it. But to be honest I’m not really sure what kind of poem you hope to read. For today I will try to expressing your emotion only. Hopefully few days later after my assignment are done, I can write you something to share with the one you love or maybe to cheer you up.
This is for now, hope you like it.
Big hug for you and hope God will ease your pain
Freya
Kiss The Rain By Yiruma
Winter Spring
Can you hear me calling?
I woke up today with saddened heart
My love,
Why are you not here with me?
Outside the world turned into white
Is it winter?
But how can it be?
Isn’t it just yesterday when the spring was here?
Flowers was blooming,
Birds was chirping,
Fresh scent of the air was filled my lung
There inside your arm I was thought;
I found my magic wand
I breathed your name when you kissed my tears
We laughed and celebrated this wonderful feeling
Happiness never was so simple,
Yet so complete
When my love;
You became the world to me
But the door had suddenly shut
And now you are gone
Chosed to say goodbye and leave me all alone
Swept all dreams away
For a thing I never understand why
In this sorrow
I still holding on
To the only hope which left unbroken
Someday you will turn your back again
And see...
How this love never less
Nor gave you any lies
My love,
Can you hear me calling now?
I fell asleep today with the tears on my face
Hoping spring will come again tomorrow
But why are you
Still not here with me?
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The pain of loss with unrequited love is exquisite and your words have captured the experience. This too shall pass.
There is a delicacy, a grace to this poem I like very much. The music melds beautifully. Spring always finds a way…as does life and love.
Your friend is right you write simply beautiful.. flows so wonderful.. you can touch hearts oh so delicate. voted up
debbie
Wow, so touching. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
I'm sure you have cheered your friend up. Voted up and awesome for your beautiful poem, Joyce
Your writing is so beautiful Freya.
Thank you for sharing this and voted up.
Best wishes Lesley
Thank you for reading and commenting, my friends.
Poem Hunter: I am glad able to give your good time in your day
Sligobay: indeed, it will pass. But still the pain really unbearable sometimes.
Genna East: "Spring always finds a way…as does life and love." Indeed. Hopefully Eve can feel the same.
Deborah Brooks: Aww, that is so kind of you. I'll try my best. ^_^ Thank you.
Lady Guineviere: Hello, dear. Thank you for reading.
Writer20: I really hope I am. ^_^
Movie Master: thank you, Lesley. Than comment really sweet.
Thank you everyone.
hi freya .. u inspire me a lot. God bless
Freya , My beautiful hub daughter ! Awesome poem. I think that love and living on go hand in hand , perhaps we all have had a love that was never realized, and doesn't it make us better souls ! Your beauty helps yor friends !.......That makes you a Huggy bear!...Be well my child!.......:-}
Hello, happy thought. Thank you. That's really kind of you. I visited your hubs today and love it. Have a nice day there.
Lol. Huggy bear? Isn't it nice? Thank you, dad. You are always an inspiration for me.
Apa kabar, mim? Have a wonderful day. You expressed many wonderful thoughts very well.
Beautiful poem dear heart. GBY.
Perspycacious & Stars439: Thank you very much. ^^
poemhunter 3 months ago
Excellent poem. The flow of words is superb. It just touched my heart. I loved all the pictures too. You made my day.